tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6662435.post8138577382761461143..comments2009-02-27T09:43:38.754-08:00Comments on catharcyst: different perhaps
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of a second...Billyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16247048418094476365catharcyst@gmail.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6662435.post-83832108884079440942009-02-27T09:43:38.754-08:002009-02-27T09:43:38.754-08:00The one thing I would change in this is the use of...The one thing I would change in this is the use of little 'i' (a personal pet peeeve, I hate the buggers in Poetry, unless you are really expressing a sense of inferiority) but the whole is lovely you,just lovely.SarahAhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11808099337912926446noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6662435.post-91376561263749822782009-02-20T08:46:22.259-08:002009-02-20T08:46:22.259-08:00Very deepVery deepOfira Sephirothhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12424097781130935369noreply@blogger.com